Is your OC a Sue/Stu?

[Paraiba Ocean]

This thread is law. xD

Srsly though. If you're unsure of your character's traits or personality, please post it here and people will read and give you feedback.

For the person posting the character: One, do not get offended personally if someone criticizes your OC. They're just trying to help you get a more round character. Of course, some people are harsher than others, but it just depends. Next, avoid getting feelings hurt by not posting self-inserts. Some advice is to use Asian names and be realistic. People aren't typically going to rule a country at age 14 and have their entire life perfectly together. Also, give your character flaws.

For the person rating the character: Don't be unnecessarily rude and offer personal attacks. It's all right to be harsh, but personal attacks on the maker is unnecessary, even if the person is a troll (in which case, contact the staff).

Other than that, go crazy.

[Empyreal Maiden]

Eh, she's been approved but just to be safe...

Name: Arisu (First name) Kodama

Age: 19

Ninja: Yes, Chuunin rank

Appearance: She wears the standard vest of Konoha ninja with her forehead protector tied loosely around her neck. She has a black shirt with fishnet sleeves under the vest and a wears a black skirt of light material. Along with her many supplies in her vest pockets Arisu has a belt that holds additional weapons, supplies, and scrolls. She is rather tall, standing 5 feet and 9 inches. She is slim and athletic with dark eyes and hair. Her hair is uneven and falls at her shoulders although usually she keeps it up in a bun or pony tail. She keeps her weight to herself but she is about 130 pounds.

Personality: She is very shy when around new people but can be loud and annoying once one gets to know her. She makes many random comments however when it is time to get things done it can be known she will try to the best of her abilities. She has some self-confidence issues as all her childhood friends have surpassed her and have become jounins. For a time she wanted to become a medic-nin however her family did not support that path and she did not take that opportunity. It is still an idea that she considers. Arisu has few friends but the ones she has she is very loyal too, she tries to remain positive and upbeat however she sometimes feels useless although she conceals it from her family through her random and irregular behavior. Arisu is highly opinionated and is not open to some people. She is afraid of old men and won't eat fish whole as "the eyes scare her". She likes kittens and wants one however due to missions she realized she wouldn't have the time to adequately care for one.

History: Arisu's family is one consisting of many talented ninjas. Her father was well known throughout the region and her mother created various new jutsus. They died when she was very young and she was raised by an aunt. Her aunt was very critical and constantly stated that Arisu would not live up to her family name and would be too weak to become a good ninja. However, once Arisu graduated from the academy, her demeanor changed. Her aunt pressured Arisu to become the head of her class and when that did not happen, she began to ignore her niece. Arisu found comfort in her teammates and eventually became a Chuunin and no longer lives with her Aunt. She has not had any relationships and is shy around guys, making many odd remarks when around them that she later regrets.

Eh, it's my first Naruto OC so if I need to make changes or scrap this one, let me know ^^;